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a little light adjustement. Hope it looks better. :heart:

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Photographer: me
Model: Audrey
Make up: me


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Critiques


:iconcathiegraphy:
Hello Edera, I really like this work you've done. The extreme angle, the focus on the eyes and the colour choices made are beautiful.

Tips would include maybe a touch more highlights to increase the light tones within the contrast curve and also to try not to crop fingers from photos .. or to actually go further in the crop. The balance is ever so slightly off, I would have liked to see more of the top of her head to get even more of a feeling that she's looking up at us .. I know she's already looking up but its just a feeling I have that there would be even more impact with just another inch or more of her forehead and hair being visible.

I really love your choice of making even the shadows a chocolate tone, its dark but its visible for those with a calibrated monitor ;)

Very, very nice work.
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:iconestellamestella:
AUDREY HEPBURN is looking like

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:iconthe-eyes-of-edera:
:nod: she really reminds of her!! :D

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:iconsense-of-snow:
jesus, what a beautiful woman.
can't help but think that in a perfect universe she should have been Alice Cullen.
:iconthe-eyes-of-edera:
aww :aww: :rose:

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:iconlemmy-x:
A very strong emotional charge again. Her expressions are unbelievable and you really know how to capture them. :rose:

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"I can barely conceive of a type of beauty in which there is no Melancholy."
[Charles Baudelaire]
:iconsiscanin:
Beautiful!

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:iconbatorr:
Nice photo,cute girl....
:iconthe-eyes-of-edera:
:thanks: :heart:

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Feb 14, 2009, 5:11:13 PM

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